Teen Writer’s Circle May 2013

Take 5 Prompt Writing

Prompt “As the plane took off…”

by Brie

As the plane took off, Lilian looked out the window and thought of her dad, she hadn’t seen him in awhile.  It has been almost three years, yet three minutes.  Time is weird when you’re a ghost.  Things happen, but you can’t do anything about it.  After awhile, the guards notice you and ship you away.

Lilian had been a good girl, she got good grades, was in the church choir.  Yet it wasn’t enough.  Lilian knows her fate.  She’ll be judged, and then sent down there.  She always thought she would be able to accept god when she got older, but, she didn’t get older.  She got to 11 years, 3 months, 4 hours, 2 minutes and 33 seconds before the crash that took her life.


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